It's modestly hilarious that no one comments on these posts, these days. I want criticism! So much of this stuff sucks, so I want to know what the gold (or silver, or iron, or stuff that isn't covered in crap) is. What, if anything, is interesting? What sounds lyrical? What would you want to read aloud?
Hell, do you read it? If not, this is wasted effort. Art is worth less without audience. Although, fortunately, never worthless.